This is my final magazine. I am very proud of the work I have done and completed. I think the work I have done in such a short amount of time shows promise that my music magazine will be better.
And so you should be proud as you have produced a very acceptable first fc and cp. I like how the two 'R's of the masthead are linked a slight white shadow and then how you have carried that down into the word Revision. You have understood how coverlines need to be readable, choosing a colour and font size that is very accessible. Main image is direct and fits the page. You have clearly developed confident photoshop skills here. An area for improvement would be to include (for the main task) date, issue number and a price. The cp has a clear grid design which makes it easy to read/understand. It is divided into appropriate sections - well done. There is a clear identity between this and the fc. An area for improvement (main task) would be to include more variety of images. Well done Lauren. You have a good visual understanding of the conventions and have developed confident software skills.
And so you should be proud as you have produced a very acceptable first fc and cp. I like how the two 'R's of the masthead are linked a slight white shadow and then how you have carried that down into the word Revision. You have understood how coverlines need to be readable, choosing a colour and font size that is very accessible. Main image is direct and fits the page. You have clearly developed confident photoshop skills here. An area for improvement would be to include (for the main task) date, issue number and a price.
ReplyDeleteThe cp has a clear grid design which makes it easy to read/understand. It is divided into appropriate sections - well done. There is a clear identity between this and the fc. An area for improvement (main task) would be to include more variety of images.
Well done Lauren. You have a good visual understanding of the conventions and have developed confident software skills.